Final crit feedback

In the first half of the crit, Siobhan answered the questions on the sheet we were given and then in the second half of the crit me and Bronte had a little chat about our work. Very helpful day!!

Comment on the relationship between the content and practical responses so far

• Considered lots of different aspects of the question - been quite broad
• The use of slogans and captions is useful

Comment on the clarity with which the visual responses and theory are connected, How and why does one process inform the other?

• The misrepresentation page is v.good
• Intriguing ideas - maybe need to be translated into a different format (photographs?)

Comment on the visual quality of the practical response

• Free & explorative
• Good use of character and colour
• Great bits of collage - try doing pieces that are all collage maybe?

What issues need to be addressed ahead of the submission deadline?

• Write a proposal!
• 3D ILLUSTRATION
• Good ideas - make them into photos, hands on face

My action plan before the deadline is to...

• Blog everything!
• Go towards a resolved image - create an advert